Do you see anything wrong with Kadaj? Do you have any concerns? Any plot-ideas? Is he too crazy? Is he not crazy enough? Is he too obsessed, or the opposite? I'm all ears (well, you know what I mean). We all try to do better in RP-land, but sometimes it takes some critique and advice to head in the right direction. Due to some events, for the time being, anonymous commenting is disabled, but they'll remain screened. I trust your opinion.
Don't you think it's been long enough? I want out of here, I'm bored and I'm needed elsewhere! Minato... You don't need me. If you did, would you have betrayed me? You couldn't save me before. I thought you would have cared and been fair, but I guess being a police officer is more important than a toy that does what you want. You lied to me. I won't forget...
Tell me. What keeps you motivated if at any point those people could be taken from you, never to be seen again? What makes you remember them?
[First, there's screaming, which happens to be Angeal as the communicator shows. Large, unhealed burns are all over the captor's body, some an angry red and a few still infected green. Kadaj sticks a dirty knife in one of them, the pus leaking out and onto the blade before he throws it down. More screaming ensues before Angeal begins to shiver. Leaning down, Kadaj appears again and puts the same cloth back in his mouth.]
I can't run...
I have to keep doing this. How else will you heal?